Tuesday, 29 March 2016


My camp writing

W.A.L.T:  write a persuasion argument 

This is my el rancho  writing camp post . I agree that el rancho is a safe camp to stay at. Our task was to have an argument that el rancho is a safe place. 

I think that I have done alright with my camp post 
I think you did well but you have a longer description. Grace 

Monday, 21 March 2016

Geometry post

I'm doing a scale map of class room and I'm doing my work with Hayley.
WALT: to make a scale map

45(0) is 1/8 90(0) 1/4 135(0) 3/8 180(0) 1/2 225(0) 5/8 270(0) 3/4 315(0) 7/8 360(0) 1/1 
I think that I did well at this just
I need to work on remembering the angles.
I think you did well but you could have a longer description Grace.

Sunday, 20 March 2016

El rancho home camp😊

WALT: build positive relationships
This is my camp post it has a lot of information in it also it has my goals in it my day 1 day 2 day 3 and day 4 and some questions about El rancho camp and my evaluation. 
Feed back and feed forward : I think that I done alright with my camp post but I need to work on my spelling. Grace I think Quiana has got clear images and she does need to work on her spelling.

Thursday, 3 March 2016


Walt: form our letters correctly.

Word of the week

Walt : find synonyms and a meaning of a word.

The story of Okātia

Retold by Quentin Durston and Tui Joseph.

Many, many centuries ago, when technology wasn't even thought of, there was  an enormous, muscular, mighty totara tree. It was tougher than any other tree that ever lived! In it lived a spirit! His name was Okātia. One day the birds told him something about Moana. He also heard that Moana was bigger than him! He was furious and full of anger! He tugged his roots out of the ground, and he started stomping like a giant dinosaur crushing the trees with his giant roots!

Retold by  Grace Berkeley And Quiana Rastrick 

Okātia was tumbling and turning through the forest with rage. The ground shook with power. Okātia demolished the trees as his roots went past. Tāne was enraged, his children were being crushed! Okātia felt even more angry. he didn't want anyone or anything bigger than him! He said that he was the best out of everything! The sea called Okātia and he got more and more determined to get there! The ground shook with lots of power! He started carving the gorge by crushing and destroying the great wall of rock!

Retold by Memphis Winterburn and Zyd E.

When Okātia got through the gorge he found Foxton beach. He was sinking very very fast like he was in quicksand. He didn't like it! Soon he ran into the water and he was drowning in the water as fast as a ferrari on a race track. He was coming a part of the sea. He tasted salt water and it was the most disgusting water he had ever tasted. Okātia was being dragged out into the sea! In a minute or two Okātia was gone far out in the sea and was never seen again.